Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Dance Poems

For our habit of mind, gathering data through all senses, we have written senses poems about dance. Here are a few of them.

Dance
Dance tastes like popping candy tingling in your mouth.
Dance feels feels like the air swooshing through my hair.
Dance looks like a little butterfly flying through the air.
Dance smells like freshly mowed grass.
Dance sounds like the beat of a drum.
That’s Dance!

By Joshua H



Dance
Dance tastes like sweet green apples.
Dance looks like wavy and flowy movements
Dance smells like lovely roses.
Dance sounds like the beat of music.
Dance feels like romance.
That’s Dance!

By TePaerangi


Watch this space to see how we present our poems!

10 comments:

  1. What fantastic poems that you have written using your senses.
    Mrs Robertson

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    1. Do you like doing your dance poems? Is it hard to do it? Did you have to do it in your Books?

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  2. I think yours is really good TePaerangi. I think it is better than mine.

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  3. Both of your poems look fantastic. Keep it up.

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  4. Great poems Room 15. Keep it up.

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  5. I really think that both of your poems have really good senses FANTASTIC!!!

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  6. Those poems are really great. I like yours Joshua H. I think your one is better than my one.

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  7. Great poems Joshua and Te Pae!

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  8. Great poems Joshua and Te Paerangi!!

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  9. I think they are really cool!

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